The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
05/04/09
Interesting!
I'm short, so I know exactly how you felt. I'm not sure I could see the topic of "Hot and Cold", but you have good descriptions and dialogue.
Keep writing.
Great title. It stood out in the crowd. Well written and easy to identify with.
05/06/09
creative, I enjoyed reading it and it was funny. Loved the title being repeated in the story.
jody