The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/05
That is certainly true.
Nice article, careful going over your article would would help. There were a few mis-spelled words, For instance: "there is know (should be "NO")way we will
be able to find it."
Other than few spelling typos, good job! God bless ya, littlelight
08/04/05
This moved nicely until the last phrase. The last part made it feel like a public service announcement and lost the flow. (needs a couple spelling corrections :)