The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/09
I love your choice of words!
--the strong confident soldier, then bowing to his Lord.
Well done!
05/06/09
I like this! Very good rhyming. Thank you.
05/06/09
Good thoughts and images here. Thanks for sharing this.
05/06/09
Very well thought out. Good characterization. Good job.
Mona
I liked your knight who was strong, not in his own strength.
05/06/09
Lovely use of language. Nice job! I look forward to reading more from you.
This is good. Love the way you presented this.