The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/09
A very touching prayer to the greatest 'Daddy' anyone could hope for! One who doesn't promise everything in life is fair, but does promise that He will never leave us or forsake us.

One piece of advice would be to break your story into smaller paragraphs. It makes it easier for your readers to read your content without too much eye strain. Good job.