The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
ROFL!!! What a darling couple! I just love this piece. The realationship between them, is very well portrayed and the sneakiness on both parts...well, that was realistic too! Good stuff here!
05/06/09
*smile*...sometimes the subtle hints backfire, don't they? I liked the way it seemed like you were sharing girlfriend secrets. Well done!