The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
Good descriptions! Was she staying at a retreat center? Where's the address to this place?
Love the chocolate connection. Was a bit confused as to why the handsome stranger knocked on her door.
There seems to be a disconnect from the openning paragraph with the rest of the story.
05/07/09
This story is yummy. Loved how she was ready for God's answer. Why spend time with Him if you don't respond, right? Good story.
Mona
05/07/09
Hi Linda. I just wanted to leave a quick note to congratulate you on your 2nd place win in Level 1, and to let you know you also did extremely well overall, ranking 40th out of all the entries for the week. That's very good for a Level 1 entrant.

It was a big week of entries, so you really deserve an extra pat on the back.

If you would like to see the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=373619

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.
Again, well done. :-)

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
05/08/09
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 2ND PLACE LEVEL WIN! GOOD JOB! :)
05/08/09
My curious side kept asking, Where exactly is your MC--at a Christian retreat center, a B & B she goes to each year for spiritual renewal, or ??? The opening paragraph could have included that bit of info.
Liked the story and the connection to chocolate--which made this a sweet entry. Congrats on your EC placement.