The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/09
Very interesting story. Too bad you had to keep it short for the contest--I imagine this would make a great novel. Don't worry if the technicalities of English are difficult for you. You can team up with someone who can take care of that.
05/05/09
Good story. The English could use some help, but you have good ideas. Keep writing!