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04/24/09
Very powerful and emotional poem.

There are a few places that have the wrong punctuation (question marks in particular).

I know parents that have been through this type of situation and you captured the mother's heart perfectly. Great poem.
A beautiful fervent prayer of a loving mother penned in poetry. The emotions all seemed genuine and real. Well done.
04/30/09
Lifes lessons, are our precious children are Gifts from the Lord. we treasure them when we receive, and we learn to give God back those same treasures when He asks.
May you be blessed in knowing where your baby is.