The Official Writing Challenge
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Great reminder that He is our Beginning and our End.

This would be easier to read if there were stanza breaks. I know when I was in Beginners, I needed help formating my entries. Feel free to ask on the Boards if you have questions.

I read this a few times just to soak in the wonderful message. Great job.
A good devotional with a great message. You used very few words, but the ones you chose conveyed a sincere truth. I think some spacing between your ideas would have helped the reader and not made the piece seemed rushed in its telling. Good job.