The Official Writing Challenge
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A poignant and well-told story with the reminder in the conclusion that this is only our temporary home. Well done.
08/02/05
That was a very touching story through and through. I just can't tell you how sad I was reading the end. That was an awesome picture with words. God bless ya, littlelight
08/04/05
Oh wow! excellent!
08/05/05
Very real, well-told story. Sad ending. good writing!
08/07/05
A well written, winning entry.
08/08/05
DUH! My dad just pointed out that it wouldn't have been the butt of the gun pressing against his temple, but the muzzle or the barrel. So much for my attempt at sounding intelligent!
It's ok, Anita. It really doesn't take anything away from the story, which is excellent. Congratulations on your win!
08/08/05
Anita, congratulations on your 3rd place win in the Level 1 Champion Challenge Awards. Well done - even with the gun around the wrong way. ;-)

You also came in at 14th place overall, so that is really an excellent achievement for a beginner - particularly considering how many entries there are to the Challenge each week. Again, congratulations. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)