The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/05
I liked the story, but I think that if we space paragraphs it is a little neater, and easier on our eyes to read. Thank you for sharing your experience. God bless ya, littlelight
08/04/05
Nice work -try breaking it up a bit though for an easier read.
Enjoyed seeing your thoughts and the way you used your experience in Belize as an illustration. Thank you for sharing.