The Official Writing Challenge
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Hi! Just so you know, the challenge is supposed to be anonymous. You can't comment on your own piece or submit it to general submissions until after the results come out next Thursday.

That said, I really liked this piece. You have vivid descriptions and strong emotions in here. Good work.
Good job! Your title got my interest. This is a creative piece with some very descriptive writing.
Nicely done with some great not overly done descriptive phrases. Keep up the good work.