The Official Writing Challenge
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An interesting take on Ruth.
I got a little confused over James' death and both sons somehow keeping secret marriages.
Probably it had been due to word restrictions, but I felt the story was crammed with too many conflicts.
You're a good writer and show a lot of promise.
A broad and sweeping story that points to the fact that the events in the life of Ruth can still be lived out today - if we but have faith. You did a good job, especially knowing you were limited to only 750 words.
04/25/12
I loved this Americanized version of this favorite Bible story! Really brings it home. Thanks and a nice job of writing.