The Official Writing Challenge
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A thoughful devotional.
Your article is good. I especially like your last sentence; very encouraging.
You were able to engage the reader in the moment with your story and make them feel for your characters. My only suggestion, to make this easier on the eyes to read, would be to put spaces between your paragraphs. Otherwise, good job in your emotive writing.