The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/09
love it. :)
04/25/09
There is a great message here and your poem flows nicely. Good job!
I don't know about putting quotations around what the Lord (didn't) say, but your poem certainly contained a lot of the problems of both the past and the present.
Good job.
04/26/09
I loved the down to earth view of life, especially to see the person in the security of their own home, finding answers in God's word!
Pam Ford Davis
Very thoughtful and insightful. Keep writing.
Love the poetic way you lead your readers to the one conclusion that should resonate with all of us, but so seldom does.