The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/09
love it. :)
04/25/09
There is a great message here and your poem flows nicely. Good job!
04/25/09
I don't know about putting quotations around what the Lord (didn't) say, but your poem certainly contained a lot of the problems of both the past and the present.
Good job.
04/26/09
I loved the down to earth view of life, especially to see the person in the security of their own home, finding answers in God's word!
Pam Ford Davis
04/27/09
Very thoughtful and insightful. Keep writing.
04/28/09
Love the poetic way you lead your readers to the one conclusion that should resonate with all of us, but so seldom does.