The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your article and connected with the feelings of a mother's emotional turmoil.
I enjoyed this, but would even like to seeit expanded.
Very nice writing indeed.
04/25/09
This was very well written. Don't be afraid to use more of your word count to develop characters. Good job!
You've inspired a sweet, lovely, and prayerful "Mamma's heart" in me for my GOD-given precious little ones. The tenderness and love you have expressed for your child encouraged me more to desire "that which is good" as a mother.
Thank you.
Keep writing!
04/27/09
All of us who are mothers can empathize with your words. How beautifully and delicately you portrayed mother and child.
04/27/09
Very Nice, I liked it. Well written.
Beautiful - it was as if reading a personal diary of a loving, caring parent. The title speaks eloquently to the great possibilities that lie before the sleeping child.