The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your article and connected with the feelings of a mother's emotional turmoil.
I enjoyed this, but would even like to seeit expanded.
Very nice writing indeed.
This was very well written. Don't be afraid to use more of your word count to develop characters. Good job!
You've inspired a sweet, lovely, and prayerful "Mamma's heart" in me for my GOD-given precious little ones. The tenderness and love you have expressed for your child encouraged me more to desire "that which is good" as a mother.
Thank you.
Keep writing!
All of us who are mothers can empathize with your words. How beautifully and delicately you portrayed mother and child.
Very Nice, I liked it. Well written.
Beautiful - it was as if reading a personal diary of a loving, caring parent. The title speaks eloquently to the great possibilities that lie before the sleeping child.