The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/09
A great memory written well. Thanks for sharing it.
04/18/09
These are awesome memories. One thing, though, you should put a space between your paragraphs to make it easier to read. How cool that she found a Bible to read the stories for herself. Very good.
04/20/09
I love your entry! Thank-you for a well-thought-out story.
04/22/09
Oh, I like this piece! Very vivid and descriptive. Other than a few sentences that need a little bit of punctuation polishing this is really good. I would like to read more as it drew me in and made me want to see what was going to happen to the modern day "prodigal child".