The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/09
An interesting re-telling of the prodigal story.

Be careful, when writing in first person, not to begin too many sentences with "I". And I'm not sure I could find the topics words here.

Keep writing--I enjoyed your sparse style.
04/21/09
Interesting perspective.
You had enough words left to develop the setting more.
Wonderful story, wonderful truths.