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An interesting and humorous little adventure. Seems very true to life. The only suggestion I can offer might be to give the awaited daughter a name so you don't have to repeat "youngest daughter" so often.

God's best to you in your writing!
04/18/09
Well, that certainly was an adventure. Maybe a little bit more information than we really needed to know in some spots, though;) Good story.
04/24/09
Hi Debbie. I just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Hot Tub Adventure," actually did very well in the Hot and Cold Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 9th in that Level. There were a lot of entries this week, and competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=25299

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Again, well done. :-)

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)