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04/16/09
I really like the parallel structure here, and your writing is very good.

It might be just me, but I couldn't find a reference to 'cold' here. And maybe somewhat shorter paragraphs, with perhaps a short row of asterisks to divide the three sections?

This was a compelling read.

04/16/09
Good descriptive writing here but not sure how it exactly fit the topic.
04/16/09
I love the rich description, the repeated lines in each paragraph and the reference to the theif on the cross that pulls it all together. I also thought the title was thought provoking! Great job!
04/18/09
I enjoyed this and saw the references to hot and cold, especially in the last paragraph. Your writing is very descriptive. Good job!
I enjoyed the description. I too saw the connection of hot/cold.

Good job.
04/24/09
Hi Kaitlyn. I just wanted to leave a quick note to congratulate you on your Highly Commended award in Level 1, and to let you know you also ranked 33rd overall. That's an excellent result for a Level 1 entry. There were a lot of entries this week, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=25299

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Again, well done.

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
04/24/09
Wow. Incredibly powerful. Beautifully written.