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04/09/09
Excellent. Such a gripping description of the ups and downs of life and the way you have interspersed it with Scripture, is just wonderful.
04/09/09
Very creative!

I liked the verses intermingled with the incidences. I especially liked the last one...CONSTANT.

Well done!
04/11/09
A clever idea, and a great last line.

I'd have liked more of your own words, perhaps a sentence or two about each of your life's ups and downs.

I like the rhythm of this entry.
04/24/09
Hi Dalyn. I'm a week late, but wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Seesaw," actually did very well in the Up and Down Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 10th in that Level. There were a lot of entries for this topic, and competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=25204

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Again, well done! :-)

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)