The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/09
Wonderful title!

This almost felt like two pieces in one--the devotional paragraphs interspersed with the story line. It felt a bit unusual to me; I wasn't sure which I was reading. I wonder if it'd work as well to have your characters speak the lessons, or to trust your readers to learn the lessons through the actions and emotions of your characters.

So many pieces this week are full of hope, and yours is definitely one of them!