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04/10/09
Love the open ending of this story!

I'm not sure how the title applies, since a labyrinth is more 'back and forth' than 'up and down'.

But your character has certainly experienced ups and downs, and you used the topic well.
04/11/09
Jan, thanks for your comments. My title had more to do with the ending of the story. Having experienced the ups and downs of sporting fame, my character re-enters the labyrinth of answers people give to try to find the one which really will work.
04/13/09
Welcome back to the challenge. Good story that kept my attention and the ending was tantalizing. Just noted a couple of missing words here and there, but overall nicely done. Blessings~