The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/09
Nice to read about a family that is functioning well!

Watch out for commonly misspelled words; I caught 'alter' for 'altar' and 'sensor' for 'censor'. And I'm not clear on how the topic applies to this story, but I could have just missed it.

I like the way you portrayed the relationships of the various family members.