The Official Writing Challenge
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Love it, the title, and that middle line place-difficult for a Type A like me to maintain. Good work.
04/10/09
Love the kitten simile in the first papragraph!

I had a hard time figuring out the ages of your main characters--teens? Young adults? One of each? A little bit of context would have helped that a bit.

Really appreciate the message of this story.
04/13/09
Good thoughts!
When we trust in the Lord, there isn't so many ups and downs, are there?
Thank you for writing this.