The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
I really liked this story! Very good! Nice character portrayal, descriptive and how true!!! God bless ya, littlelight
08/02/05
A very creative approach with a great challenge to all of us.
08/02/05
Very convicting for Christians! We tend to just be with other saved people but we're here for the lost. Thanks for the reminder.
08/02/05
A good reminder -nice ending :)
loved the story....makes me want to get on my p's and q's. Thanks
08/04/05
Very good story. I like the way the ceiling went on forever and the sobering thoughts you've provoked in the story. Good job.
08/07/05
A nice diversion from the heaven/hell choice. It reminds me of that statement-the chief end of man is to gorify God and enjoy Him forever.