The Official Writing Challenge
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A great ride! I lived every breathless moment and loved the cute ending.
Excellent descriptions taking your reader along on this exciting ride.
Wow! I liked how you built up the suspense. It's amazing what a human can do at the most dangerous of times. I don't think I would have been able to accomplish the feat of grabbing someone and being able to walk afterward. I would have hit the ground the second I got off.