The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this is so beautiful. It just flows. Unfortanately, I didn't get my entry done in time but it was fun trying. Keep on writing with your heart. This is tender and really ministered to me. God bless
Very beautiful; my heart is swelling with emotion. Can't wait to see who wrote this.
04/09/09
Very nice.
04/11/09
I like this. Keep on writing to the glory of God. I love it when scripture is faithfully used in these challenges. God bless, Vince.
04/11/09
Excellent poem, with superb rhyme and meter, wonderful story-telling.

I'd urge you to resist the over-used rhyme of 'love' and 'above'--it's ubiquitous in Christian poetry. You're an excellent poet--reach beyond the usual!

This is one of the best poems I've read this week.