The Official Writing Challenge
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This evokes memories of my dear mother and the anticipation of a reunion. Thanks for sharing your story.
03/23/09
I love this ideas presented here.

I would have loved more "showing" instead of telling. Perhaps try talking about what she was thinking as she walked in the church. She probably talked to someone as she walked in. Maybe they asked about how she was doing? What did she say?

Again, a good concept, and great message. Keep writing!