The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/09
Enjoyed the way God kept calling to Madge and she kept doing her thing, not His. God finally got her attention. Ouch!
03/22/09
Good story line; enjoyable read. I noticed some tense switches and a few structural things. Just PM me if you'd like to know more. Blessings~
We need to be reminded to serve in our giftings, not work to score points! I love your boldness and daring to infer that a loving God would get our attention that way! Halelujah! Good writing is useless without good concepts!