The Official Writing Challenge
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03/23/09
I like the honesty here, of a man (or woman) interested primarily in stuffing his face at a church function, then confronted with the call of God. Speaking as a preacher myself, I think your ending would have had more force had your MC tried speaking to the people with whom he came in contact rather than just praying for them. Nevertheless you raise some important questions here about our response to the demands of the Kingdom
We tend to forget that the mission field is in our homes and neighborhoods as well as overseas. You showed the inner-turmoil well.
03/25/09
You wrote with conviction. I sensed the urgency and the struggle of the MC. Good job.
Mona
03/26/09
Congratulations on your highly commended. Very good message, and very well written. Great job with the topic.