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03/19/09
This story made me see the fruitless attempts man makes to find God, and all we needed to do is invite Him in. Great Job!!
03/20/09
This is a creative and thought provoking perspective on this topic.
Hi I thought that this was a great sermon and i loved the ending. Super stuff.
03/23/09
The vanity and futility of mere religion come across loud and clear. I felt though that the repetition was a bit overdone. I would have been inclined to have your 'prophet' appear after the third excursion and then end humorously with everyone heading off to the east.
03/26/09
Hi Charlie. Once again, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 1, placing 13th for that level. Lots of entries this week, so you did really well.

As always, here's the link to the Highest Rankings on the message boards so you can check them for yourself:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24937

Another very good entry. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)