The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/09
A Poem!

You have good rhythm and rhyme. I like the descriptions.

Very well done!
03/22/09
Although I occasionally write poetry, quite honestly I generally have a difficult time reading it. I really enjoyed this though. It flowed so well and kept me interested. Great rhythm and good descriptions.
04/03/09
This is a very touching poem. Can't help but feel sad for those who are not ready to meet the Lord. This was very well done.