The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/09
wow...there is a lot here!
I like the idea of faith being a child. I think it would have been better to develop that more.
It would help the reader if you leave an extra space between paragraphs.
You have some good thoughts.Keep writing.
03/20/09
wow...there is a lot here!
I like the idea of faith being a child. I think it would have been better to develop that more.
It would help the reader if you leave an extra space between paragraphs.
You have some good thoughts.Keep writing.