The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/09
Beautiful phrasing, this could be the lyric for a hymn. Pay a little more attention to punctuation (') and proofreading--a couple of errors distracted me. Your piece was full of heart, though. Nice work!
03/24/09
I like the mentioning of the "princes and princesses" of the kingdom. What an awesome privelege to be allowed that!
THis is a neat praise to God. It didn't quite flow off my tongue as easy as I'd hope, but I've not done well with poetry.
I do love the pace and the feeling of sunshine bursting forth.