The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/09
Glad you were able to see your niece answer the call to be a missionary in Africa. How wonderful that she has been so blessed, too!
03/13/09
I'm not quite certain why you have formatted your piece in this way. It looks as though you have typed your story strait into the submission box. It makes it very difficult to read, which is a pity since your point about different people being called to missions really needs to be read.
03/13/09
Thoughtful testimony.
03/13/09
This is a neat story with a great catch at the end. Can you show me your story though, not just tell it? I'm not sure if you want to put this into a poem the way it is formatted, but I think it would be a nice article reporting not only the facts, but some details so the reader can relate and be drawn in. Keep writing it's a great start!
03/16/09
God works in mysterious ways, doesn't He? I think it would be great if you went into some of the experiences that your niece has had in Africa. Could make for an interesting read....anyway...keep writing!
03/18/09
That is awesome that through your family your dream was fulfilled.