The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/09
Lovely commentary of and appreciation for Africa is expressed in this poem. Some vivid descriptions of a beautiful country.
Beautifully written. A rich take on the true Africa.
A very nice personal description of the continent of Africa.
03/13/09
Excellent use of metaphor here: quilt, jigsaw, greenhouse... Very vivid. Your affection for Africa shines through.
03/13/09
A from-the-heart piece of writing that communicates with exceptional clarity.
03/13/09
I liked your poem - good writing easy to read. thanks you.
Thank you for this beautiful poem and tribute to Africa.
So pleasant to read something encouraging about Africa. Being proudly South African it does my spirit good reading this.
This is beautiful. Quite a passionate expression of your heart.
p.s. Welcome to the challenge.