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03/13/09
A well-argued piece. The problems of Africa are complex, but I share your conviction that economic aid without the Gospel will never bring lasting change.
A small suggestion on writing style: try leaving more white space to make it easier on the eyes of the reader. Also read your piece aloud to yourself to catch little mistakes here and there.
It was a nice touch to start with a quote from an African clergyman. Good job!
03/13/09
Hi - I agree the problems in Africa are huge - many people in Africa are praying for their nation and there is revival goig on in Uganda, and other areas. They just need more of it. God that is. Thanks for sharing.
03/18/09
This is a very thought-out piece. You present very good arguments. Good job.