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It drew me in and made a solid connection with my emotions. It left me wishing that Aaree could avoid the harsh reality of this world and remain innocence. Well done!
Very well written piece. You have captured the feelings of the innocent yet naive Aaree's point of view very well. It is definitely not just a small sacrifice. The sacrifice is too big to be worth the wealth and it certainly is not happiness.
This is very well written. You pulled me in from the I want to know what happens to her. Very good job with the topic.
A simple yet powerful statement of why the Bible says the love of money is the root of all evil. Good job.
I felt as though I were in the room. The sacrifice is no small one, that is for sure. It is sad that people turn and believe they can handle it though.
this was a great read. I liked the subtle undertones and the simplicity of reason. The father demonstrates hypocrasy as he originaly takes a stand on principles, yet compromises himself when the money flows. Good job on this one!
A well written entry on a very, very sad topic.