The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/09
Good job with the dialogue and descriptions.

I was left wondering, however, why the pagan crowd was at the house in the first place. Did they know people were worshipping God inside? Did they come to get them? Perhaps, if there had been no word limit, some of those questions could have been answered.

Nice job with the topic.
03/07/09
You did a nice job of incorporating an element of fear. I was reminded of how blessed we are to be able to worship with out fear - for now.
Excellent descriptions.
Good writing. Unfortunately brothers and sisters in less freer parts of the world have to worship in this manner today. Hopefully we will remain free to worship freely in the U.S. for a while longer.