The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/09
This is a really great piece- well written, and filled with lots of emotion. Adoption is such an awesome thing!
03/05/09
This is nice! My brother and sister-in-law have talked about adopting a child from China.
aww that was so cute!
I was touched when you wrote about the pin on her top that wrote "please love her"...how touching...thank you for loving her.
03/05/09
Well done. You vividly portrayed the tenderness of your memories of Candy as a baby. "Please love her" - very moving!
03/06/09
There is a lot of heartfelt emotion in your story. I wanted to know more of Candy's future, but your ending was well done.
03/06/09
Very nice.
This was heartwarming. The miraculous bond that comes with adoption is amazing.
Well done and a very moving story.
Well done, a lovely, well written story. I look forward to reading more entries.
03/10/09
I enjoyed this very much. The love between parents/child shows strong. I like the "Gotcha Day"
Good job.
Mona