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03/07/09
Your voice in this story is very upbeat and youthful. You did a nice job of reflecting a once-in-a-lifetime trip. I enjoyed it.
03/07/09
Lovely! I really enjoyed reading this, I felt as if I were right there, enjoying this whole, delightful trip. Is this a true story? It certainly reads like one! Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful experience!
This was fun. I especially liked the parts when the language barriers brought about different outcomes than your MC hoped for, and through her time and experiences she learned Japanese.
Well done.
03/13/09
Hi Remi. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Nostalgia," actually did very well in the Asia Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 9th in that Level. Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24717

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)