The Official Writing Challenge
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What a sweet story! I'd love to see it expanded and get to know your MC better.
Awww! I like how your title fits this neat little piece. I was hoping for a longer story, but this was pretty good. Just a tip though, next time add a few extra spaces

to make for easier reading! Great stuff, keep it up!
I liked this story, but agree it could have been longer. Well done.
Hi Jena. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Fulfilled Promises," actually did very well in the Asia Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 15th in that Level. Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)