The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/09
Very good story, and well-written. Just a little fix with the "Harold" and "Herald" and it would be A++.
03/07/09
A charming story, thanks for sharing this reminiscence.
As a general point, the theme for the Challenge this quarter is geographical and therefore entries should refer to one of the nations of Asia.
Why don't you take some time right now and read through a number of the stories that your fellow writers have submitted. It's amazing the variety of subject material in these entries. And you can even leave comments on others' stories to let them know what you appreciated about their writing. God bless.
Poor Harold... Poor Asia... I'm glad she learned the lessons taught. Well done.