The Official Writing Challenge
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Perfect title, and an absolutely beautiful telling of a tragic story with eternal consequences. I assume this is based on truth. It came across as so.
This sure piqued my interest. I would have loved to have read more the details (assuming this is based on a true story.
Enjoyed the story. As a writer, you show potential. Carolyn seemed familiar, like an old friend.
Boy, I didn't see that coming. That was sad, as is the fate of many of the early missionaries that have given their life to share the gospel.
I enjoyed following the MC's journey. You're right, she could have no more precious cargo than God's word.
You brought Carolyn a live and likable , I cheer her on in her journey, cried at her ending while rejoicing at her mission being carried on by the people she was sent to. If this is a true story I like to read more.
I enjoyed this story very much. Too bad for the word limit, I would have enjoyed more.
Hi Dena. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Precious Cargo," actually did very well in the Asia Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 6th in that Level (so you just missed out on an award). Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)