The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/09
I like the theme of this story.
It would help the reader if you divided it into paragraphs and between speakers, with an extra space between paragraphs.
I like your characters. Well done!
Oh my, this is precious. The theme is gently woven and well-written. Forgiveness is definitely a balm when the Holy Spirit pours it through our hearts, we just need to be willing.
03/05/09
Hi Susan. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Forgiveness," actually did very well in the Europe Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 8th in that Level. Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24615

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)