The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done! I like how the comandante realizes that there really is a Divine Intervention!:0) I especially like how he reveals to his comrades what has happened and seems broken and remorseful at the end. Nicely written! God bless!
I really like this article. Especially, how you tie their praying directly to the voice of God to the Commondante. Great job!
Nice. Really nice.
Excellent! You portrayed the setting and characters very well. Great writing!
You have done a good job of constructing your story. The conversation fits the emotion and you didn't spoil your divine ending. Well done. I hope you take advantage of the growing you can do here. If you ever get a negative gold box, just think of it as Diamonds instead of just gold. It will help you grow as a writer.
Good story. Scary situation with a powerful ending.