The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/09
What an excellent example of descriptive writing. You helped me really see what you were writing about through the words you chose.
03/01/09
Beautiful use of description in your story. Wonderful!
03/02/09
This writing is beyond "Beginners" level. Your beautiful description of the Cathedral allowed the reader to follow you through your spiritual journey and feel the enjoyment you experienced.
03/02/09
You will not be in beginners long with phenomenal imagery like this. Very, very well done.
03/17/09
Loved the imagery here and it was one of my favorites during the Europe week! Congratulations on your placing. Here you come intermediates!
I had to take a glimpse of your other entries and came across this. Your imagery is amazing, truly gifted by the Lord Himself. Praise God for working through the minds, hearts and hands of his children. When we listen and let Him write through us great and marvelous things happen. Thank you for sharing this with us. Blessings to you, your wife and sons.