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02/19/09
I really liked this story. "Kuch Kuch Hota Hai" is one of my favorite Indian movies. I had to chuckle over the line that they didn't have "Kuch Kuch anything." Kuch Kuch loosely translates to "something".

I never thought of the movies as postcards from India. After this, I will think of your analogy when I watch the latest DVD release.
02/23/09
Fresh and interesting, current. I liked your story and the way you told it.
Good job.
Mona
I thought this was really good, the analogy and the little bit of humor peppered in.
02/25/09
This was an enchanting piece. I loved how you brought India to the US through the MC's friend, Sadhna. Your writing is very descriptive and drew me in. Good job!