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02/21/09
This read like a news story.

An extra space between paragraphs would make it easier to read.

Thank you for writing about what is happening in India.
This is very enlightening.As a woman, I feel really bad about the way women are being treated by the SRS though the their intentions are justifiable but unlike christianity, they do not correct with love. I have learnt alot from ur piece. Thank you.
02/23/09
this article is not only different, but its humorous, (the burnt popcorn bit really hit home....b4 u watch a movie, the popcorn comes out burnt, your toast! haha... i thought it was funny) but this aticle is an eye opener. we are so blessed to even have our freedom as women, and they have to go through all of that just ovr valentines day! makes you think. i loved it!!!!!!! your an amazing writer!

ps GREAT ENDING!!!!!!


POINT MADE!=)
02/23/09
PS
I WISH I WOULDVE KNOWN THAT I COULDVE SENT A CARTON OF PINK UNDERWEAR I WOULD HAVE JUMPED ON THAT BAND WAGON!!!AAAAA-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
OH THE POWER OF WOMEN